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Franklin Pierce College Affinity of Authoritarianism and Anarchism Essay

Nice job taking a deeper look at this article. Tips:
-fix header font
-great hook
-sentence 2 verges on a bit long (4.5 lines)
-great thesis
-overall, very nice introduction. Great academic tone and voice.
-Here, you need a better transition than “for one”: Wood’s unfortunate inclusion of several logical fallacies throughout his article, for one, challenges his credibility as a competent writer and thus combats the potential impact of his argument.
-you tend to use a lot of dashes. Use them more sparingly or they become distracting.
-paragraph 2 is a bit too long. Consider doing one shorter paragraph one each fallacy.
-Since you tend towards long sentences, sprinkle in some shorter ones for variety
-I would aim for no longer than 3/4 page or 1 page per paragraph
-odd line break on page 5
-Make y our conclusion at least 3 sentences long
-WC needs to appear on a new page. Follow MLA formatting and include hanging indent.
Great argumentation and wording. Work on paragraphing and other little tune ups. Thanks!

Franklin Pierce College Affinity of Authoritarianism and Anarchism Essay
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